Excuse us for being a little quiet on the blogging front for a while! It’s been a busy year for most of the authors in our independent collective and we have also been discussing how best to share our news and tackle marketing as a collective! For the moment we have decided to stick to Facebook and this blog as they are both already in progress and it would be silly to stretch ourselves too much at this point. Our main goals remain the same! We are a tightly knit group of experienced independent authors who have come together to help support each other and improve our visibility.
Our author’s 2025 update and 2026 predictions!
K.M. Allan
After the completion of her compelling Blackbirch series, K.M Allan turned her hand to non-fiction in 2025 to share her expertise and experience with aspiring writers. Writing and Editing Checklists: Everything You Need To Take Your Book From First Draft to Publication was released in June 2025. This came with a companion book, Authoring Checklist Book, which is a free ebook listed on her website: https://kmallan.com/authoring-checklists/
She also put together an anthology of short stories and poems written by the young people who attend her creative writing groups and workshops and this was published in June 2025.
Finally, she has just set up the pre-order link to her next release, The Dark Finds You. This book, which can be read as a standalone but is also the final book in a connected universe of characters and stories, will be released on 9th January 2026 but you can ore-order it now:
Coming in 2026 for Chantelle Atkins: First up in January, will be the release of The Dark Finds You, followed closely by another anthology written by the young people she works with. Something Happened In Lakeside View… is a collection of stories and poems all set in the same strange little town! You won’t have to wait long after that for the release of the first in a five book folk horror series! Black Hare Valley Book 1 – 1996 was recently serialised and shared on Chantelle’s blog and Substack and will be released on May 1st 2026.
Richard Dee
Richard has been as prolific as ever in 2025 with the release of three exciting novels in 2025! You can find them listed below with their buy links.
Miriam has spent 2025 working on an ‘experimental’ novel, which we are all very excited about! Meanwhile, here is a link to a blog post she wrote for us on authors responding to the rise of AI, followed by the books Miriam currently has available.
Prolific and award-winning author Kate Rigby has been working on the third draft of her memoirs during 2025 but has found the time to contribute to the following publications:
Coming from Kate Rigby in 2026: Kate will continue to produce blog posts and poems, and hopes to be nearing the end of editing her memoirs!
Sim Sansford
Sim has been quietly working on the follow up to 2024’s YA slasher thriller, Welcome To Hollow Wood. You can find the link to that below and we look forward to reading part two, titled, Lie, Lie again in 2026!
coming soon!
Steven Smith
Steven has just released a collection of festive short stories and flash fiction just in time for Christmas!
Coming in 2026 for Steven Smith: Steven plans to work on a thriller in 2026 and may also get around to the third book in the Chronicles of The Crow saga!
Continuing our exploration of what generative AI in creative writing means to authors, this week we have author Chantelle Atkins giving her views on the topic.
image belongs to Chantelle Atkins
1.Do you currently use any form of AI to enhance or improve your books and if so how do you feel it makes your writing better?
I don’t use anything except for spell and grammar check on Word, if that counts. I now have AI ‘help’ installed without my permission on Word and on Outlook email and I find it incredibly irritating.
2. How do you feel about AI in the creative industries in general, eg art, writing, music, are you in support or are you against? Tell us why.
While I can understand and see the benefits it may have for some creatives in some industries, my overall view is that I do not support it. For example, I can understand struggling authors opting for AI to create book covers and audio books, but it makes me sad that this is taking work away from voice actors and artists. I think AI art itself, and AI used to ‘improve’ creative writing is wrong, and a form of cheating. It’s taking a short cut, in my view. It’s selling yourself short. I worry that in the future people will rely so much on AI to communicate and be creative that we will start to lose our own imagination, one of the things that makes us human! I am also against it as it is incredibly bad for the environment due to the amount of energy and water it needs, and I also find the scraping of author’s works without their permission and with no compensation, in order to train AI repugnant and morally wrong.
3. How often are you coming across AI content on the internet now and are you usually able to spot it?
More and more, and I can spot it because the content all has a similar tone and voice to it, a similar style, if you like. What I have always embraced and loved about writing is how no two authors would write the same story in the same way. We all have a very unique voice and way of storytelling, whether we realise it or not and content written by Ai does not. I find it very robotic and often quite cringy.
4. Do you know of any creatives who have already lost their job or seen their earnings decline thanks to AI?
Not personally, but it is early days. I have certainly heard of artists, designers and copy writers in particular losing work and I think this will only get worse.
5. Copy writers and translators are just two professions that have seen their earnings decline as companies switch to using AI. Who do you think will be next and is there anything we can do to stop it?
I fear that essay and article writers will be next, freelance creatives who submit regularly to magazines and newspapers, for example. If the company hiring them finds it is cheaper to feed information into AI and have it write a quick story for them, I can see them taking advantage of this. I think copy writing in general is where we will see AI creep in more and more. Book cover designers will lose work and voice actors.
6. What are your gut feelings about AI in creative writing? Are you curious and excited by the possibilities, or do you think it spells the death knell for creativity and imagination?
My feeling is that we have got this far without it, we’ve had Shakespeare, the Brontes, Stephen King, I could go on – they didn’t need AI to inspire or shape their words and stories, so why do we need it now? Our imagination, our ability to construct stories, deconstruct them and rewrite them, edit them, revise them and share them, is what makes us human. I also think that writing should be hard. It’s incredibly important and shouldn’t be something we just hand over to AI. We should struggle through drafts and rewrites, we should work at our craft to get better and better. If we ask AI to do it for us, can we really say the work is ours? Can we really take the credit? Can we really be truly proud of the result? As for AI shaping emails and now even Whatsapp messages, I fear where this will lead us. We already live in a world where we are dangerously disconnected from each other. From self-service checkouts to automated responses when we phone companies, it is getting harder and harder to deal with humans. If we don’t feel connected to each other, will we care about each other at all? Imagine getting AI to write your Whatsapp messages to your loved ones… That terrifies me.
7. Would you personally read AI content if you knew it was AI or do you aim to only read books written by humans without the aid of AI?
I would never ever knowingly read AI content. The trouble is I think it will get harder and harder to spot it. I aim to only ever read work written by actual humans.
8. Where do you think AI will be in another 5, 10 years time?
This is what worries me the most. It is so fast moving and at the moment the law has not even caught up with it and had no idea how to deal with the AI models stealing author’s work to train it. It will just get faster I think, and I predict we will be living in a very different world in 10 years time, one where people speak to and communicate more with AI than they do with each other.
9. Do you think AI in creative writing will ultimately be a bad or a good thing for writers?
Bad. Very bad. I honestly struggle to see its benefits! Especially when it comes to crafting essays, articles, poems and stories. If you can’t do it yourself, should you even be attempting to? I just can’t not see it as cheating. I think people will lose imagination and confidence in their own abilities as they hand more and more tasks over to AI.
10. Use this last question to voice any concerns about AI specifically in creative writing
I worry most about young writers. I work with children who have grown up with smartphones, the internet, social media and now AI. Some of them use AI to help them spell, and some already use AI to improve their work. I would rather they studied the craft of writing and figured it out for themselves. I worry that we will lose a generation of writers as it becomes easier and easier, second nature even, for them to run everything they write through AI in order to improve it.
For the next few weeks we will be diving into the topic of AI and it’s potential impact on authors. We’ve asked our authors the same questions in order to gauge their views and feelings on AI. Up first, award-winning author Kate Rigby.
Kate Rigby – photo belongs to the author
1- Do you currently use any form of AI to enhance or improve your books and if so how do you feel it makes your writing better?
I’m assuming you mean generative AI, as I think we’ve all been using a form of AI for years without even considering it as this eg filters in Photoshop or other photography apps to enhance book covers, Word processors programmes like Word that use basic grammar, sentence correction/improvements and so on. For poetry, for instance, instead of physically cutting up pieces of paper you can get AI to ‘cut up’ sections for you.
Recently I tried using ChatCBT or similar for a short story synopsis as I didn’t know where to start and synopsis writing is not one of my skills! As this isn’t creative writing in the same sense (more highlighting themes and summarizing) I feel differently about it and see it as a useful tool. Even then, the summary that AI came up with I just used as a starting point.
2. How do you feel about AI in the creative industries in general, eg art, writing, music, are you in support or are you against? Tell us why.
Apart from the above uses eg as a tool, I’m pretty much opposed to it as are most ‘serious’ artists (in the wider sense) who have often taken years to hone their craft. I was horrified to see an ad come through my newsfeed from Amazon advertising about writing books with AI. As if there weren’t too many of us already trying to chase an ever-shrinking audience as it is!
I have heard one or two neurodiverse authors say they have used AI and it’s helped them but I feel very uneasy about it. Surely creativity comes from something that has moved and inspired us to create and convey a feeling or human experience? For me it would depend on whether they are using it as an aid or to generate content. I feel too many people just think of it as an easy and fast way to make money and have instant success without putting in the hard yards. That isn’t art, but painting – or writing – by numbers. Besides which, I’m hugely opposed to it on ethical grounds. It’s been trained on all the content out there without permission so it’s theft of intellectual property.
There’s also the environmental toll of using AI and how much energy is needed.
3. How often are you coming across AI content on the internet now and are you usually able to spot it?
I sometimes see eg in writers’ forums people posting their book covers and asking for feedback. Luckily, a lot of the contributors in the discussion can spot AI a mile off and frown upon its use. The people I’ve seen posting are quite open about using it and maybe haven’t thought of the moral arguments. But it’s already becoming harder and harder to spot as generative AI becomes more sophisticated. Most people say they can tell because there is something soulless about it eg book covers. The same has been said of writing. For this reason, I’m very glad I write non-genre fiction which is less formulaic, ergo harder to generate. It’s the same with poetry. AI will come up with rhyming poetry rather than free verse. (See last question). So if you write more quirky stuff, you are ‘safer’. At least, for now.
On the other hand it may have uses for audiobooks. Many authors are prohibited from converting their books to audio books because it’s time consuming and labour intensive and ergo very expensive. This would be good work for actors but notoriously difficult to find the right reader. At the moment AI isn’t up to the mark for generating spoken content for audiobooks, especially where accents and dialect is concerned. But I could possibly see benefits in the future (but see below re performance art).
4. Do you know of any creatives who have already lost their job or seen their earnings decline thanks to AI?
I think it’s a creeping thing. I’ve heard of eg editors and proofreaders getting less work. I’m sure the same is happening with book designers and certainly there was the whole issue on Hollywood where actors and performers were on strike because they were no longer being paid for their work. AI generated voices were used instead.
I once entered a poetry competition where the feedback was generated by AI! Though a lot of the feedback was uplifting I felt uneasy about it. I don’t know how much of it was used for the judging. Did the human judges assess first or did they rely on AI to weed out the long and short lists?
I notice some online publishing sites and stock photography sites don’t accept the AI images. However such sites are having to rely on trust from contributors as it gets ever more and more sophisticated and hard to tell apart.
5. Copy writers and translators are just two professions that have seen their earnings decline as companies switch to using AI. Who do you think will be next and is there anything we can do to stop it?
There’s a big discussion in the music industry as well as the other creative industries. We are already seeing how the sound and voices of real musicians can be replicated very convincingly.
6. What are your gut feelings about AI in creative writing? Are you curious and excited by the possibilities, or do you think it spells the death knell for creativity and imagination?
I fear it to be honest. I do see potential for audio books because if we could, many of us would produce these ourselves if we had the time and equipment so wouldn’t be taking jobs away from others. I think it’s fine to use as AI as a tool but never as a replacement or to generate something from scratch. But I can see boundaries becoming more and more blurred.
7. Would you personally read AI content if you knew it was AI or do you aim to only read books written by humans without the aid of AI?
I would like to think I would only read that generated by humans but I know of someone who’s quite openly mentioned using AI for poetry. I was quite shocked although I know this person to be honest and with integrity. People who’ve grown up with it may not have the same moral dilemma as older people do.
8. Where do you think AI will be in another 5, 10 years time?
I’m hoping that changing the copyright laws may at least go some way to retstrain it although it may be very difficult to prove as the genie’s already out of the bottle. But at the moment it’s like the wild west with no protections or limits. I think we have no choice but to accept it and work with it as it’s here to stay.
9. Do you think AI in creative writing will ultimately be a bad or a good thing for writers?
I guess we have a chance to make it work for us rather than the other way round. There was an interesting podcast which was summarised recently in Disability Arts Online looking at the pros and cons particularly for disabled people.
10. Use this last question to voice any concerns about AI specifically in creative writing
I think I will show here rather than tell. Out of curiosity, I fed in a few lines from my notebooks on two separate occasions a year or so ago and asked AI to write a poem based on those few lines which were:
light spillage
echolocating animals emit calls out to the environment and listen to the echoes of those calls that return from various objects near them
This was the resulting AI poem. I will leave readers to make up their own minds:
In the realm where darkness lies,
A symphony of sound takes flight,
Echolocating creatures take their aim,
To navigate a world untamed.
With calls that pierce the still of night,
They unleash waves of sonic might,
Through vast expanses they explore,
Guided by echoes they adore.
Like beams of light, their calls spill forth,
Bouncing off objects, revealing their course,
In the reverberations, secrets unfold,
A tapestry of knowledge, yet untold.
With every echo, the world they perceive,
Each sound a clue to help them achieve,
Survival’s dance in shadows deep,
As echolocating wonders they keep.
Oh, let their example light your way,
Let inspiration guide you each passing day,
Embrace the echoes, let them be your guide,
In this vast universe where wonders reside.
Thank you for inviting me to be part of this important discussion.
In her work, Miriam Hastings is concerned with exploring the position and experience of the outsider. Her first novel, The Minotaur Hunt, was published by the Harvester Press and won the MIND book of the year award in 1988. A revised edition is now available in paperback and on Kindle, with a new afterword by the author.
“The Minotaur Hunt is beautifully written with an immediacy and urgency that has you turning the pages…” – Amazon Reviewer.
Her collection of short stories, Demon Lovers, was shortlisted for the Scott Award (Salt Publishing) in 2010. Three of these short stories are available on Kindle as The Doll and other stories: Strange tales.
Her historical novel, Walking Shadow, set at the time of the gunpowder plot, has been published on Kindle and also as a paperback from FeedARead. The story follows Edmund Shakespeare, a lead player of female roles on the London stage, who has been taken to the Tower, accused of treason. It’s January 1606 and London is a dangerous place; the gunpowder plot has just been foiled, spies and informers are everywhere, suspicion is rife in the streets and the terror of Catholic fanatics has gripped the people as well as the Government. It isn’t only players who perform a part, it’s only safe to go in disguise and many hide behind a mask. It’s a time when everything is uncertain and nothing’s what it seems. Like so many lurking in the streets of the city, Edmund adopts multiple disguises and beneath those disguises he hides many secrets. At all costs, he must keep these secrets from his enemies – but can he work out who they are?
Reviewers have praised the novel for its depictions of history and hard hitting topics which are reflective of modern times, too. One such reviewer had this to say: It’s very clear form reading this intelligent and authentic historical novel that Miriam Hastings has a love of this period and has thoroughly researched it for Walking Shadow.
Hasting’s most recent novel, The Dowager’s Dream, is now available in paperback and as an e-book on Kindle.
The Dowager’s Dream is a surreal fantasy set on the north coast of Scotland at the time of the brutal clearances in the Scottish Highlands. The novel was inspired by the (largely imagined) lives of Miriam’s great great-grandmothers, Margaret MacKenzie and Christine Patterson, and also by an account written in 1809 by a minister’s daughter, describing a mermaid she had seen in Sandside Bay, Caithness. Although The Dowager’s Dream is set in the early years of the 19th Century, the themes of dispossession and ethnic cleansing will resonate with the contemporary reader.
You can find all of Miriam’s novels by clicking here!
You can also keep up to date with all her news, blogs, articles, flash fiction and poetry by visiting her website here.
Chantelle Atkins was born and raised in Dorset, England and still resides there now with her husband, four children, and multiple pets. She is addicted to reading, writing, and music and writes for both the young adult and adult genres.
Her fiction is described as gritty, edgy and compelling. Her debut Young Adult novel The Mess Of Me deals with eating disorders, self-harm, fractured families and first love. The novel received a wave of glowing reviews, one reader had this to say: At over 400 pages, The Mess Of Me is not short but the gritty, vibrant and engaging style will soon have you turning the pages. What I found so impressive was that it ticked all the boxes: the attention to detail is spot-on, the characters are vivid and real, the dialogue edgy and witty and the pace and plotting executed skilfully making it a real page-turner. – Kate Rigby, Author
Her second novel, The Boy With The Thorn In His Side follows the musical journey of a young boy attempting to escape his brutal home life and has now been developed into a 5 book series. She is also the author of This Is Nowhere and award-winning dystopian, The Tree Of Rebels, which readers praise for its suspenseful storyline and engaging characters. Another award-winning novel, Elliot Pie’s Guide To Human Nature, was released in October 2018.
A Song For Bill Robinson was the first in YA trilogy titled Holds End, followed by Emily’s Baby and The Search For Summer. Recently, she has co-authored the Fortune’s Well YA trilogy with Sim Alec Sansford. The Day The Earth Turned books 1-4 are her latest series release. Followed by the amazing The Boy series spin off, At Night We Played in the Road. And her follow up to her first novel, The Mess of Us, which has received multiple glowing reviews.
You can find all of Chantelle’s books, poetry and short story collections by clicking here!
You can also stay up to date with all her latest articles, blogs, and news by subscribing to her Substack here.
Today we’re joined by Award-Winning author, Chantelle Atkins, to discuss her latest release, The Mess of Us. A gripping sequel to her 2016 novel, The Mess of Me, this book dives back into the world of Joe and Lou and these of identity and resilience… Let’s get started!
The Mess of Me was a huge success, what inspired you to return to this story after a decade?
A. A sequel was in the pipeline years ago. I had always wondered what happened next to Lou and Joe. The first book ends with a sort of happy ending, but with lots of questions about what would happen after the dramatic and violent events of that book. A few years back I started writing the sequel when I got the idea of a teenage pregnancy. I was fascinated with how they would both cope with that on top of recovering from the events of the first book. It then took me a whole to get around to writing it due to other projects, but it was the teenage pregnancy idea that really sparked off the rest of it. That, and always wanting to explore Leon’s character more. He is the villain of the first book and I always feel like villains have a story to tell. How did they become that way, for example? Are they capable of redemption? So I felt like he deserved a story.
How has your writing style or approach changed in the past ten years?
A. It’s probably the same! I still start with loose ideas in my head that eventually end up as notes in a notebook which I’ll then add to whenever I get more ideas. Eventually there will be enough plot to get started so that’s what I do. I rarely plan the whole book in advance, but I always know what’s going to happen for the next few chapters at least. I’m probably better at self-editing and being ruthless with the word count though. I think I am better at that now.
Did you always plan to write a sequel, or was there a moment when you knew this story wasn’t finished?
A. I didn’t plan a sequel at the time, no. It was years later that I got the idea for the teenage pregnancy and the rest grew from there. Plus, Lou is like a lot of my characters. She would chat to me from time to time. I’d tune into her and wonder how life was going. If that keeps happening, it starts to feel like a sequel is inevitable.
What challenges did you face in reconnecting with the characters and world after so much time?
A.I reread the first book before I started the sequel. I then revamped and republished it! That pretty much gave me what I needed to pick those characters up again. Plus, they had never really left me, so it was not hard to tune into them for the sequel. As for the world, these books are part of a bigger inter-connected universe of books and I was still writing books in that universe, so again, it was not challenging to reconnect with it. It was a pleasure! I know them all so well it felt like coming home.
Were there any major plot points or character arcs that surprised you while writing the sequel?
A. No, I always had it in mind that Leon would come out of prison and Lou and Joe would have to deal with that. Would Joe want to see him, for example? Would he want to forgive him? What would Leon be like now? Worse, or a reformed character? I was really curious about that and really excited to further explore Leon’s character and back story. Parts of the plot revealed themselves to be as I wrote it, but it all felt natural so I just went with the flow.
How do you think readers’ perceptions of the first book will shape their experience of the sequel?
A.I hope they like it! A few people have read it without reading the first one so I have every confidence it also works as a standalone, but I really hope readers of the first book enjoy it too! There were a few readers that often mentioned it was their favourite book of mine and they’d love a sequel, so in some ways I had them in mind while writing it. I expect they’ll know what’s coming in terms of the gritty storylines and references to eating disorders, self-harm and drugs. They’ll also know it’s another diary style format.
Have your own life experiences over the last decade influenced the themes or direction of this book?
A.Yes. To be honest, Lou is the character most based on me. I have suffered with eating disorders in the past and the truth is, they never really go away. They follow you about and haunt you and wait for opportunities to take control again. They’re like little voices in your head that want to convince you to trust them, that they can make everything all right again. I’m much older than I was when I had these issues, but as Lou finds out in The Mess of Us, often when things go wrong, those little voices come back. So you have to be wary and careful. You can’t let your guard down. Forms of self-harm can be addictive and can be coping strategies you come to rely on. I have also experienced a miscarriage, which is another hard-hitting storyline in the book. That part was very hard to write but I hope I did it justice.
What kind of balance did you try to strike between nostalgia for longtime fans and accessibility for new readers?
A.That was the aim, to give readers of the first book a sequel they would enjoy and let them find out what happened next, but also write a book new readers could enjoy on its own. That meant Lou and the other characters had to sometimes mention or explain what had happened previously, but you have to be careful not to make it boring or repetitive for the original readers, so it is hard!
If you could go back and change anything about the first book, would you?
A.I would probably make it shorter!
Do you see this sequel as the end of the story, or is there potential for more in the future?
A.It’s the end of the story for Lou and Joe, as far as I know anyway! But it is not the end of the story for Leon. He will be back in a new book towards the end of the year. We will finally have his point of view and his full story. The book will be called The Dark Finds You and I’d describe it as a crime thriller. It is also a crossover book which will be enjoyable to anyone who has read the books in the shared universe. If you’ve read The Holds End trilogy, The Boy With The Thorn In His Side series, Elliot Pie’s Guide To Human Nature or The Mess Of Me and The Mess Of Us, you will find characters from all those books returning!
Thank you, Chantelle!
The Mess of Us is one book in a connected universe made up of various series penned by Atkins. You can grab your copy of The Mess of Us by clicking here.
Or start the journey from the beginning today with the groundbreaking 2016 novel, The Mess of Me.
Today marks the launch of the latest release by Chasing Driftwood’s Chantelle Atkins.
The release of The Mess of Us comes almost ten years after the year of its gipping predecessor, The Mess of Me in 2016 and we couldn’t be more excited. If, like us, you were captivated by Lou and Joe’s journey in the first book, prepare yourself for another powerful instalment of their story.
Atkins has a unique talent for crafting complex, deeply human characters, and The Mess of Us is no exception. The story dives into the messy realities of love, trauma, forgiveness, and self-acceptance–the one responsible for Joe’s coma–being released from prison, their fragile world is thrown into turmoil once more.
Will they find it in their hearts to forgive?
Can people really change for the better?
And with an unplanned pregnancy and Lou’s past struggles threatening to resurface, will their love survive the coming storm?
As always, Atkins doesn’t shy away from life’s hardest questions, and The Mess of Us is a novel that will resonate with anyone who’s struggled with trust, self-worth, and second chances. It’s an emotional rollercoaster that pulls no punches but offers hope in the most unlikely of places.
If you loved 2016’s The Mess of Me, you definitely won’t want to miss this powerful sequel. The Mes of Us is available now–get ready for one unforgettable, beautifully messy summer with Lou and Joe. It’s sure to be one you’ll never, ever forget.
Have you read The Mess of Me? What are you most looking forward to in The Mess of Us? Let us know!
Writer’s block is something most writers experience at some time or another and it is something that writers tend to dread. I’m not a fan of the phrase ‘writer’s block’ because there is something about it that sounds so hard and final, like a literal brick wall. I prefer to think of it as simply being ‘stuck’. And writers get stuck all the time and for many different and complex reasons. Here are just a handful of ways writers can get stuck along with tips to get unstuck again!
1.Plot Stuck #1- one of the most common and one of the hardest to get through. There are a number of ways you can get stuck when it comes to your overall plot and we will discuss two of them here. The first is the most frustrating and it happens to me a lot. You know exactly what you want to happen in your plot because you have planned it all out, created your character bios and maybe even written all your chapter outlines. You know what is going to happen, so it should be simple, right? Nope. The most frustrating thing about writing a story or a novel can be knowing what you want to happen but not knowing how to do it. I think one of the reasons we feel like this sometimes is a lack of confidence in our writing. We have a good idea, a solid plot but think maybe someone else could write it better. That’s not usually the case. You just have to accept it’s going to be hard work and a long slog to get it right. Eventually, you will bring in beta readers and editors to help point out where things could be improved and believe me, as further drafts are written and rewritten, you will eventually figure out the best way forward. Writing is largely rewriting after all!
The Solution – sadly there is no easy fix for this problem. It may involve lots of long walks and time spent thinking about your plot and how to move things forward. Sometimes the answers come when you least expect it. It may mean you have to go back to your chapter outlines and remind yourself of the plot, perhaps inspiring a way forward. Sometimes you just have to write it anyway. Put the characters where they need to be, write the dialogue, advance the story and worry about fixing it later. When you know what to do but not how to do it, the important thing is to just push through and get it done. It will probably be ugly and clumsy and you may very well figure out a better way to do it later on but don’t let that stop you.
2. Plot Stuck #2 – This is when you simply don’t know what to do next. This mostly happens to writers who don’t plan or outline their stories before they start. There is nothing wrong with that approach at all. It can be really fun and invigorating to just start writing and see where the story and the characters take you. But it does increase the risk of getting stuck eventually. You run out of steam. The plot trails away or misbehaves. You don’t know what these characters are doing. You’ve run out of ideas. It can be really scary to feel this way and many writers will give up at this point and start something else, but there is a way to solve it!
The Solution – Sometimes the only way to solve this one is to embrace planning and plotting. Go back to the start and remind yourself why you wanted to write this story, what the driving idea or concept was. Remind yourself of any important themes you wanted to explore. Take a look at your characters. Are they developed enough? Maybe they need more work to bring them to life, which again means giving in and embracing some planning. If this fails, there are other things you can try. I am a strong believer that taking long walks in nature dislodges ideas in our brains. Any time I have every been stuck with a book or a story, I have usually found the solution during a walk with my dogs. Some people find taking a long bath or shower can help or maybe another immersive task such as gardening or cleaning. Get away from the screen or the notebook and do something else for a while. Another thing worth trying is asking other people. Ask your friends and family or even people online what they think about your plot so far. This has also worked well for me in the past. I’ve often used a family member for a sounding board of everything that is annoying me with my work in progress. Often they will mention a few things or suggest something that actually really makes sense. Don’t be scared to ask for help or find inspiration around you.
3.The elusive ‘right’ words – another really common one and one I can sympathise with. Sometimes you’ve got everything else in place – the characters are fully formed, the plot is advancing well and you know what to do but then words and phrases start to elude you. When writing a first draft we want to get it right, it’s only human nature to want to try our best and achieve something good first time around. The words hide from us and its like we are looking for those perfect, right words to make our sentence really fly off the page, and they just won’t come. I hate it when this happens as it can really disrupt a good flow of writing. It’s a case of partly knowing what to say but not how to say it and partly being a bit of a perfectionist who wants to get it right first time.
The Solution – You can try some practical things like asking for help, consulting a thesaurus or dictionary or bringing in a beta reader or fellow writer to help you find the ‘right’ words. Or you can do what I do…use the words you have and move on. At some point you will come back to this passage and rewrite it. As we have already established, writing is mostly rewriting! Sometimes we just have to write the best sentence we can at that moment, shrug it off as imperfect but at least done, and move on. Remind yourself that you will come back later to fix it and more than likely the right words will be there as if by magic!
4.Not Enjoying It Stuck – Sometimes we get stuck because something is wrong. It may be a mix of all the things mentioned above or it may be something bigger. As writers, when we have already committed many hours to a story we are sometimes reluctant to admit it is just not working. I recently experienced this. I was writing a book, dedicating myself to a chapter every night, but it felt very forced. I was forcing myself to do it and that didn’t feel right to me, because writing should be fun! It took me a while but I finally figured out what the problem was, and yes it is going to involve a heck of a lot of rewriting but I am not stuck anymore! I had to admit what was wrong and set about fixing it. If you are not enjoying your writing, you will continue to get stuck or blocked so you need to work out what the problem is.
The Solution – Don’t give up. Don’t bin it just yet! You might need a break from it, in which case put it somewhere safe and come back to it another time. Write something else. Write a short story or a blog post or a poem. Give your frazzled mind a break from what has been frustrating it. This can work because if the idea is strong enough it will eventually push back through. But also, you need to figure out and admit what is wrong with it. Very often it lies with the characters. Perhaps they are not strong enough, not believable enough or developed enough. Go back to scratch with them and put more work into developing them into real people with flaws, quirks, wants, needs, mannerisms and back stories. Sometimes it might be the point of view. Try switching from third to first person or vice versa. Sometimes it might be the tense. Try it in present tense if it’s in past, and so on. Sometimes it is the audience – did you set out to write a thriller or a mystery or a romance? If you did, the chances are all the other books in that genre are sitting on your shoulder watching and adding pressure, along with the perceived tropes and expected elements of that genre. It is useful to know your audience before you write, but it can also sully the writing and make it feel like you are writing to order. Write for yourself first and foremost. Write the book you would like to read. This will bring the enjoyment back and you can figure out the rest later!
Over to you! Have you ever experienced writer’s block and if so, what was it like for you? In what ways do you tend to get stuck with your writing and have you figured out a way to get unstuck?
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Back in August 2024 I had a silent release for my latest novel, Welcome to Hollow Wood. This book has been 12 years in the making and I honestly can’t quite believe that it’s finally out.
Growing up I was always hooked on movies I was probably far too sheltered to be watching at the time — like SCREAM, I Know What You Did Last Summer, and a variety of other teen thrillers and suspense films. During my school years you would always find me in the library devouring anything and everything by R. L. Stine, too. I think that’s where my inspiration for not only this story but most of my writing stems … Good characters and irresistible twists, red-herrings, and reveals.
Cover art for the novel, created via Canva
This story first begun somewhere around 2012 when one of my university assignments for Creative Writing was to create the first six chapters of a novel. Whilst most of my classmates wrote deep, poetic romances and historical fiction, I was writing about teens and murder. At the time I couldn’t understand why they weren’t … It was so much fun!
Unfortunately, disaster struck when my laptop died and my hard drive failed to restore the file. I was devastated. All that hard work vanished, never to be retrieved. I thought about re-writing it all, but the idea of starting over and not capturing what I had upset me. I decided to put it to bed. However, over the years the characters wouldn’t stop running through my mind and in November 2021 I decided to add Hollow Wood to my list of work to complete by the end of 2024.
In some ways this story does connect to others in the Sim Alec Sansford Universe (I really need to come up with a better name for it than that!). Hollow Wood is first mentioned in my debut novel, Welcome to Denver Falls, where it is the neighbouring town. In that book the there is a baseball scene where the Denver Dholes go up against the Hollow Wood Hawks.
Book two, which I’m working on currently, also makes reference to a character featured in my series Fortune’s Well. However, despite links to these series Hollow Wood is not paranormal.
The book is currently being made into an audio version, narrated by the talented Amy McGhee. The process has been so much fun and it has been fantastic hearing Amy bring the characters to life. I was recently asked why, as a British author, I selected an American narrator for my book. The truth is I wanted to capture the essence of those 90s and 00s teen thrillers I admired so much growing up. There’s something about the American influence that brings back that sense of nostalgia for me.
The audiobook should be available by March 2025, and I cannot wait for you to hear it!
Everyone apart from Weaver Lawrence, Eliot Chase, Noah Castello and Beth Sinclair, the only ones that know the truth. At least that’s what they think.
Little do they know someone else was there that night in the woods two years ago, and they’re thirsty for revenge.
On the surface, their town of Hollow Wood seems like the perfect vacation destination. Quaint countryside, large estates, wealthy residents with perfect lives and perfect smiles.
But with senior year coming to an end and exams looming;for these four estranged friends, this year’s going to be an absolute KILLER…
READ ON FOR A SNEAK PEEK!
The plan was simple. The friends were to meet up at the quad for the first time in what felt like forever. Despite being the unofficial ringleader, Weaver couldn’t help but feel nervous at the prospect of having the old posse back together. Not only was there the obvious, immediate threat, but also things between them hadn’t exactly ended on great terms.
Beth and Eliot practically hated each other; Noah was too fucking stubborn to give into his feelings; and as for Weaver, he’d thrown himself into sports to distract himself from the truth. His life was changing, falling apart around him, and he’d sooner stick his head in the sand than face the reality of it all.
He paced anxiously across the grass, ignoring the signage that threatened suspension to any students caught damaging the flowerbeds. He couldn’t care less, not right now. Besides, it was after hours and there was nobody there to report him.
Moments later he saw a set of headlights pulling into the parking lot. It was Noah. He hopped down from the drivers seat and pulled a set of crutches from the back. Weaver felt a pang of guilt. He’d completely forgotten to consider when he’d made the call if Noah would be up to it. After all, what he was about to propose was no easy expedition.
“This better be good.” Noah said as he reached him. “These bad boys will keep me going for now but if you’re going to keep us here all night I’ll grab the chair.” He gave Weaver a wink, letting him know he really didn’t mind. Today was a good day for Noah Castello, but his mobility was so sporadic you never could tell when he’d take a turn for the worst.
Weaver didn’t get a chance to reply, before he even opened his mouth to speak two figures emerged from the other side of the quadrangle. One tall, and dressed in a crisp, clean sweater. The other, short and brooding.
“What did we miss?” Eliot asked as they approached. Weaver couldn’t help but notice the two girls were linking arms. A cursory glance at Noah proved that he’d noticed the unusual affection between the two as well. Whatever Eliot had told Beth about what was going on must have really sunk in.
“Nothing, Noah just got here too.” Weaver informed them, then gestured toward a bench by the fountain. They all took their places exactly as they would have back in the day. Girls on one side, boys on the other. It was exactly how Kelsea had instructed. Back then Beth suspected it was her way of keeping everybody in check. Plus Kelsea absolutely loved having Eliot sit opposite Noah so she could watch her squirm as she flirted with him, and reached over and played with his hair.
“So, you all know why we’re here,” Weaver begun.
“Threats. Stalker. Yeah, sure,” Noah added. “But what exactly are we going to do about it?”
Eliot and Beth looked up in anticipation. Weaver felt his brow begin to sweat, he wasn’t sure if what he was about to say was a good idea or not. But he knew doing something was better than doing nothing at all.
“We go back to the hiking trails.” He announced.
“What the fuck?” Eliot’s head practically exploded off her tiny body. “Why would we do that?”
“Well,” Weaver cleared his throat. “I was thinking, whoever is doing this must have been there that night. Maybe we’ll find something.”
“After two years?” Beth practically laughed in his face. “Seriously?”
“Well.” Weaver shrugged.
“Might not be such a bad idea.” Noah chimed in. He was staring down at his phone with his brow furrowed. He turned the screen to face them. “Looks like I finally got my first stalker gram.”
Sure enough there it was, a photo of a long, rusted metal pipe. A photo that would mean nothing to anyone else, but the Hollow Wood four knew exactly what it was. And exactly what it meant. Beside Beth, Eliot stiffened. It even seemed for a moment that all of the colour drained from her perfect face.
“So, what does this mean?” Beth asked on behalf of everyone.
“It means that whoever is doing this has been up there recently.” Weaver explained. “Even more reason for us to go.”
“I don’t think I can.” Eliot said. Her eyes flicked across at Noah who was looking back at her slightly offended. After all, if he could bear to go back there, surely she should too. Surely they all should.
“We have to.” Beth said, and Weaver couldn’t help but be a little surprised at how easily she’d agreed.
“So it’s decided then?” Noah asked. Then after a moment of silence he lifted his hand out into the centre. Slowly but surely the others placed theirs on top, Eliot being the most reluctant. “Road trip,” Noah cheered, as the group made their way across the lot to Beth’s car…
A question we often get asked at writing clubs or workshops is how do you write a book? Often someone will have a good idea for a story, and possibly some characters developing but are unsure where to go from there. It’s an intriguing question and one I personally love to talk about so we figured it would make an interesting blog post. It’s different for everyone and if you research how to write a novel you will find a mountain of advice, tips and strategies to use online. Not every approach will work for you. Part of the fun of writing is working out what suits you and your idea. So this is mine. This is how I write a book.
Start with an idea – This is the most important ingredient. You need a solid idea OR a character. For some people the plot comes first and then they have to create and develop characters to go with it, and for others, it’s the characters they think up first. Either is fine and you might find it works differently each time. For me personally it is usually the characters that come first. They will start to develop in my mind and as their personality comes alive, they will start to suggest their back story and their main story and the plot will start to grow from that. Sometimes it works the other way around and I will get an idea for a story first and then have to devise the characters to fit it.
Let it grow – To start with, I let the idea percolate in my mind for a bit. I write down anything I don’t want to forget, but most of it stays in my head. It will swirl around in there for a while, popping up when I least expect it, developing and swelling and growing tendrils! I think it’s important to let this process take its course. I don’t want to force anything. Usually I will already be working on another project so there is no hurry to jump to this new idea. I leave it be and let it grow naturally.
Get a notebook – Now, when the real ideas start to flow, and by this I mean characters, personalities, back stories and possible plots and storylines, it becomes too much to contain in my head. I must start writing things down or something will get lost. I might start off tapping a few thoughts into my phone but eventually I get a new notebook and dedicate it solely to this idea. I start off writing down any notes I already have and everything else that has been growing in my head. Character bios, dialogue, action scenes, possible titles, character arcs, possible endings and so on. It won’t be a full plot yet and the characters will not be fully alive either, but I am paying attention to this idea now. It has its very own notebook.
Work on characters – For me, the characters are always the most important aspect of books I read and books I write. It’s different for everyone, but I want to love the characters, feel fully engaged by them, root for them and care for them. I can’t enjoy a book if I don’t care about the characters and equally I can’t write a book if I am not fully in love with these people I am creating. So, I will start to write detailed character bios into the notebook. They might start with the basics: name, age, physical appearance, occupation, home, family etc and then they will get more complex. What do they want? Who do they love? Have they been hurt? What are their regrets? What are their flaws? I want to get under their skin and know them inside out. This will be a long process and I won’t fully know them until maybe draft three, but I want to put the work in now.
Write a basic plot outline – This will start as a kind of mind-map of possible ideas. Ideas tend to spark of other ideas or questions, so I will note this all down. It all goes in the notebook. It’ll be messy and chaotic but it is all safely in one place. I’ll also bullet point what I consider to be the main storyline and jot down any ideas for sub-plots and character development. Most of my books are quite character driven so developing the characters alongside the plot is important to me.
Write basic chapter outlines – I won’t usually know everything that is going to happen but I will outline as many chapters as I can in the notebook so that I have a starting point and something to refer back to. Inevitably, extra, unexpected chapters and scenes will work their way in between what I initially lay out and once I get past a certain point I will probably then know the next few chapters. I then work a few chapters ahead, so I will usually always know what I want to happen in the next few chapters at least.
Start writing! – The fun bit. Also the scary bit! But by now I will be desperate to get going. If I have been working on another book, this idea may have had to wait for a while so by the time I get to it, I am very keen and excited to get started. I won’t know exactly where I am going and I don’t plan or plot every detail. I like to see what happens to a certain extent.
Write a chapter a night – Obviously, life gets in the way sometimes and sometimes the writing just doesn’t flow but my goal is always a chapter a night. That’s roughly 2-3 pages of a Word document. I treat it like work, like a commitment and push through the tough bits and the bits that don’t flow too well and I just keep going. I don’t mind how messy or awkward the first draft is, I just aim to get the gist of it, the basics of it done. This usually takes three months.
Second draft – I read it through, reminding myself of what I have done. I amend glaring typos but I don’t really edit much on a second draft, it’s more of a read through to see what I have got.
Third draft – a more serious read through and edit. I add bits, delete bits, amend typos and errors. I will know the characters better by now so might add bits to them, their speech, their back story and so on.
Fourth draft – I keep a list as I read through and edit and make notes of bigger things to fix like plot holes or inconsistencies in character or storyline. Whenever I go over another draft I check off these things on the list until there is nothing left.
Fifth draft Kindle read – by now I feel like I can’t do much more, so I send it to my Kindle and read it on there. It’s amazing how many typos and errors are picked up when you read your book on an ereader! You feel a bit less connected to it and can tackle it in a different way. I keep the notebook handy as I read and write down notes for each chapter in turn, typos, grammatical errors, plot holes, questions, anything.
Sixth draft – back to the laptop to amend the edits picked up on the kindle read
Beta readers – I am very lucky that I have some fantastic people available to read my work at this stage and tell me what they think. I might want specific feedback ie is it fast paced enough, is this character interesting enough etc, or I might just hand it over and say very little.
Seventh draft – editing based on beta reader feedback
Send to editor/proofreader
Eight draft/final – amend anything they picked up and that’s it. Done!
The amount of drafts will very much depend on the type of story, the length of the book and the feedback from beta readers. Sometimes my first draft attempt will evolve into something very, very different and sometimes it basically stays the same!
Feel free to add your thoughts on how to write a book. Everyone has a different process and there is no correct way to do it.
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