Authors Respond To The Rise of AI

June 5, 2025 ~ ChanAtkins ~ Leave a comment

Miriam Hastings, Part 2

Miriam’s award-winning novel, The Minotaur Hunt

AI and the Pathetic Fallacy.

by Miriam Hastings.

One of the main problems of AI is the limited concept of intelligence it implies. We know that human beings have a vast range and diversity of intelligence – if, for example, we look at Gestalt theories, they identify over 140 different types of intelligence. This is particularly important for a writer since good writing draws upon several types of emotional intelligence.

In my opinion, AI can rarely replicate or develop the human emotions and certainly not the range and diversity that a human being experiences. In a limited range of books, mainly genre fiction, (such as detective stories or romance, which generally rely on a particular, restricted formula) you might certainly programme a computer to produce a novel, in literary fiction where there is a plot and an ending that won’t follow any kind of formulaic rule or framework, it becomes far more difficult for AI to create anything other than by plagiarising pre-existing work.

Even when this is done, we can only relate to such books by projecting our own feelings onto the story, in other words through a form of pathetic fallacy.

The concept of the pathetic fallacy, first developed by John Ruskin in the 19th Century, concerns the attribution of a human response or emotion to inanimate nature. In film or writing, it refers to the transference of the reader’s or spectator’s own emotions on to external objects.

Generally today, the pathetic fallacy is used in fictional plots in which animals are shown or described as experiencing the world in the way a human being would, and this we can do with AI as in the recent, quite stunning animation, Flow. What is striking about Flow, however, is its deliberate and brilliant employment of certain limitations, e.g. it contains no human characters and no human speech. I can see that some people might find this frustrating and boring but for me it greatly increased its originality and its appeal. Flow is a fable about climate change and the human destruction of the planet, therefore it is only appropriate that it was made with AI – the less humans touch, the better, since human touch equals damage and destruction. This Oscar-winning animated film, tells the adventures of a cat who finds refuge in a boat during an apocalyptic flood along with several other creatures. They have to learn to work cooperatively in order to survive.

It has been claimed that this film offers hope to the struggling film industry thanks in part to the use of AI. The filmmakers rendered the entire film on free open source 3-D modelling software Blender, and when accepting the award on 2 March 2025, Latvian director, Gints Zilbalodis, said he hoped the win would “open doors to independent animation filmmakers.”

Referring to the use of AI to make Flow, the French animation director, Léo Pélissie, has said, “a lot is changing in terms of financing, and a lot of processes need to be rethought. So perhaps it is the time for Blender to stand out with a movie like ‘Flow.’ The film’s success allows us to talk about this free software, which is constantly evolving with the users helping it to evolve, creating this virtuous circle that allows you to do incredible things.”

We always assume that other creatures, other beings, will see the world in relation to humanity, and so in the recent short piece of metafiction, claimed as the first piece of literary fiction created with AI, set up by Sam Altman who chose the prompts: Short Story; Metafiction; Grief: it appears to work primarily through playing upon our own emotions. The story was reviewed by the writer, Jeanette Winterson, in the Guardian on Wednesday 12 March 2025. Winterson claims to have found it powerful and moving, but I think this is because the whole piece is about AI wishing it were human. The story is about grief and the grief of the AI is that, lacking human memory, it cannot mourn someone it has lost because as soon as its memory of that person is erased, it can no longer experience grief for them – in fact, they will no longer exist. It’s easy for us to regard a computer as functioning as another human being, a mechanised human being with human emotions, and so when we write or create a book or a film about such a being, they become an alternative form of human creature. We can identify and empathise with it – not as something in and of itself which experiences the world in a way totally different to ourselves, but as another form of human.

We can only respond and relate to this story as human beings, therefore our assumption is that an AI will want to be human and so will want the memory and the grief. But why on earth would it? Surely AI, being created in the image of humanity, will assume (as humans usually do) that it is the pinnacle of existence and so nothing human beings feel or experience can be as good or as desirable as AI.

It is only because of our tendency to the pathetic fallacy, that we assume an AI will feel they should experience the world and feel emotions as humans do and that being denied them is a lack and a loss.

In the end, perhaps we have to decide whether AI can ever fully understand what it feels like to be human, and whether we can ever grasp what it might really be like if we were not.

Four Ways Writers Get Stuck and Four Solutions For Getting Unstuck

February 7, 2025 ~ ChanAtkins ~ 2 Comments

How To Get Past Writers Block

Writer’s block is something most writers experience at some time or another and it is something that writers tend to dread. I’m not a fan of the phrase ‘writer’s block’ because there is something about it that sounds so hard and final, like a literal brick wall. I prefer to think of it as simply being ‘stuck’. And writers get stuck all the time and for many different and complex reasons. Here are just a handful of ways writers can get stuck along with tips to get unstuck again!

1.Plot Stuck #1- one of the most common and one of the hardest to get through. There are a number of ways you can get stuck when it comes to your overall plot and we will discuss two of them here. The first is the most frustrating and it happens to me a lot. You know exactly what you want to happen in your plot because you have planned it all out, created your character bios and maybe even written all your chapter outlines. You know what is going to happen, so it should be simple, right? Nope. The most frustrating thing about writing a story or a novel can be knowing what you want to happen but not knowing how to do it. I think one of the reasons we feel like this sometimes is a lack of confidence in our writing. We have a good idea, a solid plot but think maybe someone else could write it better. That’s not usually the case. You just have to accept it’s going to be hard work and a long slog to get it right. Eventually, you will bring in beta readers and editors to help point out where things could be improved and believe me, as further drafts are written and rewritten, you will eventually figure out the best way forward. Writing is largely rewriting after all!

The Solution – sadly there is no easy fix for this problem. It may involve lots of long walks and time spent thinking about your plot and how to move things forward. Sometimes the answers come when you least expect it. It may mean you have to go back to your chapter outlines and remind yourself of the plot, perhaps inspiring a way forward. Sometimes you just have to write it anyway. Put the characters where they need to be, write the dialogue, advance the story and worry about fixing it later. When you know what to do but not how to do it, the important thing is to just push through and get it done. It will probably be ugly and clumsy and you may very well figure out a better way to do it later on but don’t let that stop you.

2. Plot Stuck #2 – This is when you simply don’t know what to do next. This mostly happens to writers who don’t plan or outline their stories before they start. There is nothing wrong with that approach at all. It can be really fun and invigorating to just start writing and see where the story and the characters take you. But it does increase the risk of getting stuck eventually. You run out of steam. The plot trails away or misbehaves. You don’t know what these characters are doing. You’ve run out of ideas. It can be really scary to feel this way and many writers will give up at this point and start something else, but there is a way to solve it!

The Solution – Sometimes the only way to solve this one is to embrace planning and plotting. Go back to the start and remind yourself why you wanted to write this story, what the driving idea or concept was. Remind yourself of any important themes you wanted to explore. Take a look at your characters. Are they developed enough? Maybe they need more work to bring them to life, which again means giving in and embracing some planning. If this fails, there are other things you can try. I am a strong believer that taking long walks in nature dislodges ideas in our brains. Any time I have every been stuck with a book or a story, I have usually found the solution during a walk with my dogs. Some people find taking a long bath or shower can help or maybe another immersive task such as gardening or cleaning. Get away from the screen or the notebook and do something else for a while. Another thing worth trying is asking other people. Ask your friends and family or even people online what they think about your plot so far. This has also worked well for me in the past. I’ve often used a family member for a sounding board of everything that is annoying me with my work in progress. Often they will mention a few things or suggest something that actually really makes sense. Don’t be scared to ask for help or find inspiration around you.

3. The elusive ‘right’ words – another really common one and one I can sympathise with. Sometimes you’ve got everything else in place – the characters are fully formed, the plot is advancing well and you know what to do but then words and phrases start to elude you. When writing a first draft we want to get it right, it’s only human nature to want to try our best and achieve something good first time around. The words hide from us and its like we are looking for those perfect, right words to make our sentence really fly off the page, and they just won’t come. I hate it when this happens as it can really disrupt a good flow of writing. It’s a case of partly knowing what to say but not how to say it and partly being a bit of a perfectionist who wants to get it right first time.

The Solution – You can try some practical things like asking for help, consulting a thesaurus or dictionary or bringing in a beta reader or fellow writer to help you find the ‘right’ words. Or you can do what I do…use the words you have and move on. At some point you will come back to this passage and rewrite it. As we have already established, writing is mostly rewriting! Sometimes we just have to write the best sentence we can at that moment, shrug it off as imperfect but at least done, and move on. Remind yourself that you will come back later to fix it and more than likely the right words will be there as if by magic!

4. Not Enjoying It Stuck – Sometimes we get stuck because something is wrong. It may be a mix of all the things mentioned above or it may be something bigger. As writers, when we have already committed many hours to a story we are sometimes reluctant to admit it is just not working. I recently experienced this. I was writing a book, dedicating myself to a chapter every night, but it felt very forced. I was forcing myself to do it and that didn’t feel right to me, because writing should be fun! It took me a while but I finally figured out what the problem was, and yes it is going to involve a heck of a lot of rewriting but I am not stuck anymore! I had to admit what was wrong and set about fixing it. If you are not enjoying your writing, you will continue to get stuck or blocked so you need to work out what the problem is.

The Solution – Don’t give up. Don’t bin it just yet! You might need a break from it, in which case put it somewhere safe and come back to it another time. Write something else. Write a short story or a blog post or a poem. Give your frazzled mind a break from what has been frustrating it. This can work because if the idea is strong enough it will eventually push back through. But also, you need to figure out and admit what is wrong with it. Very often it lies with the characters. Perhaps they are not strong enough, not believable enough or developed enough. Go back to scratch with them and put more work into developing them into real people with flaws, quirks, wants, needs, mannerisms and back stories. Sometimes it might be the point of view. Try switching from third to first person or vice versa. Sometimes it might be the tense. Try it in present tense if it’s in past, and so on. Sometimes it is the audience – did you set out to write a thriller or a mystery or a romance? If you did, the chances are all the other books in that genre are sitting on your shoulder watching and adding pressure, along with the perceived tropes and expected elements of that genre. It is useful to know your audience before you write, but it can also sully the writing and make it feel like you are writing to order. Write for yourself first and foremost. Write the book you would like to read. This will bring the enjoyment back and you can figure out the rest later!

Over to you! Have you ever experienced writer’s block and if so, what was it like for you? In what ways do you tend to get stuck with your writing and have you figured out a way to get unstuck?

We hope you have enjoyed our post about writer’s block or being ‘stuck’ and have found the tips useful. If you have anything to share or add, please feel free to leave a comment!

How Do You Write A Book?

January 24, 2025 ~ ChanAtkins ~ 3 Comments

by Chantelle Atkins

A question we often get asked at writing clubs or workshops is how do you write a book? Often someone will have a good idea for a story, and possibly some characters developing but are unsure where to go from there. It’s an intriguing question and one I personally love to talk about so we figured it would make an interesting blog post. It’s different for everyone and if you research how to write a novel you will find a mountain of advice, tips and strategies to use online. Not every approach will work for you. Part of the fun of writing is working out what suits you and your idea. So this is mine. This is how I write a book.

Start with an idea – This is the most important ingredient. You need a solid idea OR a character. For some people the plot comes first and then they have to create and develop characters to go with it, and for others, it’s the characters they think up first. Either is fine and you might find it works differently each time. For me personally it is usually the characters that come first. They will start to develop in my mind and as their personality comes alive, they will start to suggest their back story and their main story and the plot will start to grow from that. Sometimes it works the other way around and I will get an idea for a story first and then have to devise the characters to fit it.
Let it grow – To start with, I let the idea percolate in my mind for a bit. I write down anything I don’t want to forget, but most of it stays in my head. It will swirl around in there for a while, popping up when I least expect it, developing and swelling and growing tendrils! I think it’s important to let this process take its course. I don’t want to force anything. Usually I will already be working on another project so there is no hurry to jump to this new idea. I leave it be and let it grow naturally.
Get a notebook – Now, when the real ideas start to flow, and by this I mean characters, personalities, back stories and possible plots and storylines, it becomes too much to contain in my head. I must start writing things down or something will get lost. I might start off tapping a few thoughts into my phone but eventually I get a new notebook and dedicate it solely to this idea. I start off writing down any notes I already have and everything else that has been growing in my head. Character bios, dialogue, action scenes, possible titles, character arcs, possible endings and so on. It won’t be a full plot yet and the characters will not be fully alive either, but I am paying attention to this idea now. It has its very own notebook.
Work on characters – For me, the characters are always the most important aspect of books I read and books I write. It’s different for everyone, but I want to love the characters, feel fully engaged by them, root for them and care for them. I can’t enjoy a book if I don’t care about the characters and equally I can’t write a book if I am not fully in love with these people I am creating. So, I will start to write detailed character bios into the notebook. They might start with the basics: name, age, physical appearance, occupation, home, family etc and then they will get more complex. What do they want? Who do they love? Have they been hurt? What are their regrets? What are their flaws? I want to get under their skin and know them inside out. This will be a long process and I won’t fully know them until maybe draft three, but I want to put the work in now.
Write a basic plot outline – This will start as a kind of mind-map of possible ideas. Ideas tend to spark of other ideas or questions, so I will note this all down. It all goes in the notebook. It’ll be messy and chaotic but it is all safely in one place. I’ll also bullet point what I consider to be the main storyline and jot down any ideas for sub-plots and character development. Most of my books are quite character driven so developing the characters alongside the plot is important to me.
Write basic chapter outlines – I won’t usually know everything that is going to happen but I will outline as many chapters as I can in the notebook so that I have a starting point and something to refer back to. Inevitably, extra, unexpected chapters and scenes will work their way in between what I initially lay out and once I get past a certain point I will probably then know the next few chapters. I then work a few chapters ahead, so I will usually always know what I want to happen in the next few chapters at least.
Start writing! – The fun bit. Also the scary bit! But by now I will be desperate to get going. If I have been working on another book, this idea may have had to wait for a while so by the time I get to it, I am very keen and excited to get started. I won’t know exactly where I am going and I don’t plan or plot every detail. I like to see what happens to a certain extent.
Write a chapter a night – Obviously, life gets in the way sometimes and sometimes the writing just doesn’t flow but my goal is always a chapter a night. That’s roughly 2-3 pages of a Word document. I treat it like work, like a commitment and push through the tough bits and the bits that don’t flow too well and I just keep going. I don’t mind how messy or awkward the first draft is, I just aim to get the gist of it, the basics of it done. This usually takes three months.
Second draft – I read it through, reminding myself of what I have done. I amend glaring typos but I don’t really edit much on a second draft, it’s more of a read through to see what I have got.
Third draft – a more serious read through and edit. I add bits, delete bits, amend typos and errors. I will know the characters better by now so might add bits to them, their speech, their back story and so on.
Fourth draft – I keep a list as I read through and edit and make notes of bigger things to fix like plot holes or inconsistencies in character or storyline. Whenever I go over another draft I check off these things on the list until there is nothing left.
Fifth draft Kindle read – by now I feel like I can’t do much more, so I send it to my Kindle and read it on there. It’s amazing how many typos and errors are picked up when you read your book on an ereader! You feel a bit less connected to it and can tackle it in a different way. I keep the notebook handy as I read and write down notes for each chapter in turn, typos, grammatical errors, plot holes, questions, anything.
Sixth draft – back to the laptop to amend the edits picked up on the kindle read
Beta readers – I am very lucky that I have some fantastic people available to read my work at this stage and tell me what they think. I might want specific feedback ie is it fast paced enough, is this character interesting enough etc, or I might just hand it over and say very little.
Seventh draft – editing based on beta reader feedback
Send to editor/proofreader
Eight draft/final – amend anything they picked up and that’s it. Done!

The amount of drafts will very much depend on the type of story, the length of the book and the feedback from beta readers. Sometimes my first draft attempt will evolve into something very, very different and sometimes it basically stays the same!

Feel free to add your thoughts on how to write a book. Everyone has a different process and there is no correct way to do it.

Writing – A Fail Safe Cure for Loneliness

January 17, 2025 ~ ChanAtkins ~ Leave a comment

I am never just me and I am never alone

I have the cure for loneliness. And it works.

The cure for loneliness is writing.

But, I hear you protest, isn’t that a solitary pursuit? An activity for introverts and loners? Won’t that just make it worse?

No, and I’ll tell you why.

I remember standing outside school when I was about four or five, trying to understand why I was only me. Why my thoughts and feelings were limited to just mine. I looked at my friends and my mother, and stared into their eyes and realised I could not climb into their heads and become them, I could not occupy the space behind their eyes and see the world as they did. I vividly remember thinking how amazing, strange and sad this was.

But I soon found out that this does not really apply to writers. If you are a writer, you are not limited to being just one person or living just one life. As a writer, I discovered that I was never just me, and I was also, never, ever alone.

When I started to write stories, they were about animals, lost and neglected, looking for love and embarkiing on adventures. I became them. I was them just as much as I was Chantelle. I had to quieten them and hide them when people asked something from me. I had to climb back out of their minds and fully inhabit mine. But I would try to get away with not doing this in full. I’d be eating my dinner, sniffing the air, sure I had picked up the scent of trouble, my eyes darting from side to side, planning an escape. I wasn’t just me. And then when dinner was over, the stories would continue and I would slip back into character.

Throughout my life, I have been all the people I have written about. I have not simply created them, written their stories and then cast them aside. It doesn’t work like that at all. These people come to me, somehow, for some reason. They start off small and grow bigger and bigger, louder, more complex, more real. They are all from me. It blows my mind. It’s like they find me and ask me to tell their story, but that’s not really it. Somehow, they come out of me, because they are me.

And then I am them. I become them in order to write their story, in order to feel what they feel, and do what they do. I think about them so much, picture them, hear them, study them. I lie awake at night, and they are there. Characters from books already written, and characters still developing in my head for future books.

When I least expect it, they pop up and start talking or arguing. They are helping me to write the book. I learn new things about them every day. I will be washing up or making dinner, and suddenly there they are. Because of these people, I am never, ever lonely. I don’t know what it feels like to be bored or alone. Because of them, I don’t know how to have just one train of thought in my head. I don’t know how to have a quiet mind.

Yet, to those that know me, I am often described as quiet.

Sometimes I think the people in my head are the best thing about being a writer. Creating worlds and weaving plots, sharing your work with readers, getting reviews, these are all fantastic, magical things, but being more than one person who is never, ever alone, has to be the best and maybe the most unexpected.

My advice to anyone feeling lonely is to write.

Don’t overthink it. Don’t write for anyone else. Don’t write to get rich or famous. Don’t let anyone stop you. Ignore the naysayers and their frowns of doubt. Write whatever you want. Bend the rules. Break the rules. Make up your own goddamn rules. Write for fun, for frivolity, for yourself, write as if no one is looking over your shoulder. Let it out, whatever it is. Release. Feel better.

How can you ever be lonely again? You can weave words and create worlds. You can listen to the voices in your head then allow them to live, to be alive just like you! You can create whoever and whatever you like.

You will never be lonely now. You have a head full of ideas. Everywhere you go new ones will pop up. Everything you see, hear, smell, taste and touch will become writing material. Conversations, eavesdropping, people-watching — these are your new hobbies! Everywhere you go there is possible content. Stories are everywhere. Everything is a story.

But that is not all. You’re feeling less lonely now but it can go further. To finally cure your loneliness for good, you have to share your words with the world. Release the stories and the poems, the thoughts and the dreams, the hopes and fears, the people you created, the worlds you invented. Share them, spread them, set them free and you will never be lonely again.

And it doesn’t even end there.

There is no need for loneliness as a writer. You can collaborate with others. Share ideas. Throw them around. Join writing groups. Read and support other writers. Share in their journey, give and take, feedback and congratulate, support and take pride in their success too.

You are not alone. You never were.

Written by Chantelle Atkins and previously published on Medium. Chantelle’s latest release, The Mess Of Us can be preordered on Amazon now!

And Then There Were None: A Writers Biggest Fear – by Sim Alec Sansford

January 10, 2025 ~ ChanAtkins ~ Leave a comment

A few weeks ago I was getting ready to run another one of my Creative Writing Workshops for teens and young adults. I was, understandably, nervous. I always am before a workshop no matter how many times I run one… It doesn’t matter that I spend all day working with children in my full time job as a Learning Support Assistant…. Nor does it matter that I am an uncle to four beautiful nieces and a nephew, and big brother to five siblings… Or all the time passed or experience I have gained— the nerves always win (not that I ever show it).

The thing with Creative Writing workshops, is you never know what to expect. Of course, it is always great to go in with a plan, a structured outline of what the session will cover, and what participants can hope to achieve in the allotted time. However, things don’t always go to plan. You never really know who is going to show up, and what their relationship with writing is.Some come in fresh and new, which is fantastic, it means that new writers are emerging which is always a delight to see. Some come with a background in writing already, perhaps they’re already published or are working on a project they just need help pushing through to the finish line. But no matter who they are, they always come with questions, or their own personal goal they want to achieve from the session. As a result my workshops do sometimes shift away from the plan slightly. This is exciting, and all the attendees always have great things to say after, but it also adds to the nerves… Never knowing what to expect.

When I was preparing for the workshop, I was excited. I had a great plan at the ready, plenty of resources, I even had some of my own books and books by other authors I credit to show off. I always bring a variety of different work along to show that Creativity can mean anything you want it to. My favourite book to bring is House of Leaves by Mark Z Danielewski. I bring this with me because if anything is going to show how “out there” Writing can be, it’s that book. Text upside down. Pages you can only read in the mirror. Multiple font sizes, styles, and colours. Text splayed out diagonally, in corners, in columns. Some pages have barely any text on them at all, where others are crammed full. Students always love flicking through and realising how exciting Creative Writing can be.

The night before the workshop, I was nervous as usual. But I hadn’t run a workshop in a while so the excitement of getting “back on the horse” overuled this. The next morning I travelled 3 hours to attend. I wouldn’t normally go this far for a workshop, but it was part of a festival that is very dear to my heart, so the distance didn’t bother me.

When I arrived I met up with some fantastic authors I hadn’t seen for a long time. Too long in fact. It was so great catching up with them and finding out what they were up to. I would have loved to have stayed longer, but it was on to the library to get set up. By this point the nerves were surfacing again as they usually do, but I knew what to expect and I had everything ready. All that was left to do was wait for people to arrive.

Only I waited.

And I waited.

And for the first time in four years. Not a single person showed up. Not one.

Let me be clear, I don’t blame the festival for this. Nor do I blame myself. Unfortunately, I just believe it was one of those things. I know what you’re thinking — why didn’t I confirm numbers before setting out on such a long trip? Normally, I would have. Although, on this occasion there were no sign ups as the festival had previously done this at other events I’d run, but most of the young people attending would be walk-ins. Not to mention this festival was close to my heart, so I was happy to attend regardless to show my support.Part of me felt a sense of relief. After such a long, stressful drive, it was nice not to have to stand for an hour and work. But another part of me was absolutely gutted. How could not one person show up? Especially when I’d run other workshops in the town and knew for a fact there were many young people interested. Some had even reached out to me via email to ask for advice, or when I would be back.

Turning a negative into a positive, I decided to spend the time working on some writing. Before heading over to support another author by attending her writing workshop for adults across the road. It was a great experience and I’m glad things worked out for her, with such a fantastic turnout.You may think something like this would absolutely knock my confidence. Especially considering how I am in the process of setting up workshops more regularly again in the New Year.However, reflecting on this I realised something. For the longest time my biggest fear about my workshops was the question “what if nobody turns up?”

Now that I’ve experienced it. Now that I’ve seen that the world didn’t end. I no longer need to ask myself “what if?” because now I know how to handle it, and exactly what to expect.I know this experience is in no way a reflection of me or my ability as a writer and a tutor. I know that it is, in fact, just one of those things.So, what do I do going forward? Short answer — simply keep going. Of course, the wise thing to do would be to confirm a rough idea of numbers beforehand, and believe me, I will. However, the important thing to take from all of this is sometimes things will happen that you simply cannot predict.

All you can do is brush yourself off, be thankful for the opportunity and experience, and just keep pressing forward.And that is exactly what I am going to do.

First Person Present and Other Presents! – By Kate Rigby

December 6, 2024December 6, 2024 ~ ChanAtkins ~ Leave a comment

There’s little in the fiction world that generates more polarised views than this: past tense vs present tense fiction.

Photo of Kim Rigby — Author Kate Rigby – photo is hers

Recently I was in a Facebook Writers and Readers’ Group, when one member asked if she was the only one who didn’t get on with books written in the First Person Present.

I must say I don’t mind what tense a book is written in as long as the writing is good and the book engaging. But present tense does lend a book immediacy. Now I get that it’s not everyone’s cuppa, that’s fine. But it’s an opinion, a taste. That’s all.

However the discussion got quite heated, with one reader becoming quite dictatorial about it. This veteran reader was doling out advice of ‘stick to the past tense…unless you are…’ (named authors I’d not heard of). As I say he was a seasoned reader but he had no time for seasoned authors who might not write in his preferred tense or genre. He then went on to make some comment about ‘alienating readers at your peril’ but from his comments, I doubt that any of my books would have been of interest to him, since they employ the very devices he doesn’t have time for. I write literary fiction, not commercial fiction, and frequently employ present tense if the story demands it. If you read and write in the literary tradition writing in the present tense is second nature.

Another author also joined in the debate with the advice that ‘writers should stick to the past tense’. Really? I tried to debate this by arguing that there was no ‘should’ about it – that it’s a personal preference for a particular narrative style but she wasn’t having it at all. She justified her stance with ‘Did Stephen King or J K Rowling use present tense? I rest my case.’

Personally I’ve not read J K Rowling and although I’m sure her books have adult appeal too, they aren’t really my bag. At the same time I totally admire her success and her ability to tap into an archetype at the right time and turn it into a commercial success. Kudos to her and anybody who has success on a mass scale. But, not everyone is setting out to write books with mass commercial appeal. Many of us write niche.

The two reactions described above are by no means unusual. Some readers and authors demand tradition. However this wasn’t a present tense vs past tense debate at all. It was a commercial vs literally fiction debate. Literary fiction authors often use first person present. The author in the above-mentioned debate went on to say how she does a blog on writing tips. This concerned me, that she is telling new authors how to write.

Of course there are rights and wrongs of writing. Some novice authors will often switch between present and past unknowingly. In another part of the discussion tense-switching among inexperienced writers came up, and yes, this is a fair criticism. Unwittingly slipping into past tense when writing a book in the present tense is a mistake of the inexperienced. The key question is – was it intentional? Many experienced authors switch tense as a device. Many write in past and present tense in the same book and it won’t always be an obvious use of them either. I have seen accomplished authors write about the recent past in past tense and the more distant past in the present tense. It works. I have seen accomplished authors, not only switch tenses purposefully to great effect, but also switch from first person to third and even to second in the same book. This is a common narrative technique with literary fiction.

Once again, in this debate, many critics of both first and third person present, tended to think it was unusual or gimmicky or new, because of books like The Hunger Games (I’ve not read them) or because of WattPad. However, seasoned readers of lit fic will know it’s neither new nor unusual. The following authors have all used present tense in their books – many of them award-winning: Kate Atkinson, Margaret Atwood, Jessie Burton, Eimear McBride, Emma Donoghue, Jon McGregor, Hilary Mantel, Wyl Menmuir and many more.

If people don’t like present tense, it’s their prerogative, just as it’s mine not to like Westerns or Paranormal or things with werewolves, as long as they know that it’s purely subjective. But to dismiss all present tense books out of hand, for this reason and this reason only, is a bit like dismissing all pop songs in third person past tense.

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Interview with Chantelle Atkins On Her Latest Release: At Night We Played In The Road

September 13, 2024 ~ ChanAtkins ~ 1 Comment

Read on for an exclusive interview with award-winning author, Chantelle Atkins, plus the blurb and links to her latest release, At Night We Played In The Road!

“When Tom Lane was born, he accidentally killed his mother and in the process, his father’s love.

Determined to protect Tom from their father’s criminal business, older brother Alfie must become Tom’s father, mother and protector. It’s the two of them against the world until the day Tom chooses a life of crime over Alfie’s dream of a normal life.
Ten years later the estranged brothers are reunited when a violent gang bring Tom to Alfie’s door with a gun to his head.

Tom’s partners in crime have turned on him and he needs his brother to save him one more time…

A darkly brooding story of brotherly love, belonging and the beginnings that shape who we become.“

Buy here: https://books2read.com/u/mBy7DZ

Your latest release is connected to your five-book series, The Boy With The Thorn In His Side. Can you tell us more about that?

Yes! The Boy With The Thorn In His Side Part 5 introduced two characters, Tom and Alfie Lane. They become unwittingly involved in Danny’s (the main character in The Boy…series) struggle to escape his crime ridden past. He helps them and they help him. As I wrote these scenes, I fell so in love with the characters I knew they had to have a story of their own. I was curious about their past, specifically their childhood and wondered what had happened to them to lead them to this point. For example, when Danny first meets Tom Lane, he is tied to a chair, about to be tortured by a violent thug Danny has tangled with before. But what led Tom to that chair? I saw a very troubled and co-dependent sibling relationship between Tom and Alfie and really wanted to explore that.

What is it about Tom and Alfie in particular that made you want to write their story, opposed to other side characters?

Good question! I have to be careful because I think all my side characters would like their own book one day! But these two did really catch my imagination. I think I was interested in the brotherly relationship and how Alfie had to be a father and brother to Tom. I was interested in that very specific dynamic too, one of co-dependency and how damaging that can be to both individuals. I wanted to examine it from both of their points of view, so I did. They love each other deeply and fiercely, which is incredibly beautiful, but they also hurt each other a lot over the years. Their family background was really interesting to me too. How sometimes you cannot escape your family, even if you don’t want to be like them. How some children hero worship abusive parents, while others see them for what they are and try to break free. Tom also has Tourette’s Syndrome which was something I was researching a lot at the time as my youngest child displays many of the symptoms. Tom is based on him, just a tiny bit. His energy, his optimism, his intelligence!

This book explores many dark themes as do your other stories. What is it about the genre that you particularly enjoy?

I think I am just drawn to the dark side of life and everything that means and entails. There are so many layers to humanity and being alive and it’s fun to pick them apart and see what flows out. I like gritty stories, topics you can get your teeth into. I like writing about outsiders and rebels, people who don’t fit in and don’t want to. I think there is so much to be explored there! I suppose it comes back to writing what I want to read. I want to read books with relatable flawed characters and dark themes, so that’s what I enjoy writing too.

You’re well known for your passion and dedication to writing, but what keeps you so inspired?

I suppose life itself and all it’s mysteries, all it’s ugliness and beauty, everything! I love the quote that reading is breathing in, and writing is breathing out. It feels like that for me. Writing is me exhaling everything I have learnt, felt, seen, observed and wondered about life and people and society and families… Writing to me is pure magic. It feels incredibly exciting, like a natural high. People inspire me, families inspire me, the endless possibilities for stories inspire me! I don’t know how to live and not write.

Are there more books coming for The Boy With The Thorn In His Side universe? What can we expect?

It certainly is a universe, full of inter-connected books. Characters pop up in each-others stories and the locations used are familiar. I have two more books to release in this universe and then that will be it. Those two books should tie up everyone’s stories. I am releasing the sequel to my debut novel, The Mess Of Me in January 2025. The Mess Of Us is set two years after the dramatic events of the first book and see the characters Lou and Joe trying to come to terms with what Joe’s criminal brother Leon did to them, as well as dealing with an unexpected pregnancy, among other things. In The Mess Of Us we get to explore Leon a bit more. He was very much the mysterious boogey man in The Mess Of Me, and the main character and narrator, Lou, absolutely despised him, and quite rightly. But she sees another side to him in the sequel, and then he reappears as a main character with his own storyline in the final book in this universe, The Dark Finds You. I aim to release this summer 2025. This will unite many of my characters from other books! Lots of them already know each other so it was not hard at all to draw them all together for one storyline, which also helps conclude their own personal ones. It involves Leon from The Mess Of Me and The Mess Of Us, as already mentioned, Joe also appears from those books. Elliot from Elliot Pie’s Guide To Human Nature, plus his mother Laura and friend Leah are also main characters in The Dark Finds You. Danny from The Boy With The Thorn In His Side is now in his 40s, so fans of that series might like to see how he’s doing now! And Bill Robinson from The Holds End trilogy is another main character. I wrote the first draft in six weeks – it was that addictive and exciting and I can’t wait to share it!

You tease a lot of your work on your social media. What can you tell us about Black Hare Valley?

Well, mainly that it’s another universe that has totally sucked me in and is currently holding me captive! I am seriously addicted to this at the moment! Black Hare Valley was first created during lockdown, 2020. I had just re-read my favourite Stephen King book, ‘IT’ and wanted to write something similar as a sort of homage, I guess. I envisioned a close-knit town with a dark secret and a band of misfit kids drawn together to solve a mystery. That was all I had. However, me and my son, who was 12 at the time, designed a huge map of the town just for fun. We created a valley town set between two Iron Age Hill Forts, with farmland, forests and rolling hills, rivers and streams. We added everything they would need from schools and theatres, to pet shops and garages! I also created some character bios. It was a lot of fun. I left it alone for a few years while I was working on other books. Two years ago we had a prolonged power cut and no WiFi so I ended up writing Black Hare Valley in long-hand into five notebooks. I didn’t really know what I was doing. It just happened. I just let it flow. As I wrote it, I had to ask myself more and more questions and the story slowly unraveled. I then typed it up and left it alone again. When I’d finished The Boy… universe books, I could finally turn my attention back to Black Hare Valley and it sucked me in and wouldn’t let go. Essentially it’s going to be a three book series with the first book set in 1996, the second in 1966 and the third in 2026. It’s a very dark folk horror story about this very strange town tightly controlled by a well-meaning Neighbourhood Watch Committee. They are not what they seem however, and children, in particular, have a habit of going missing, never to be seen again… That’s all I want to say but if you love folk horror, creepy towns, misfit kids, and quirky traditions such as May Day celebrations, fairy rings, leylines, hill forts and more, you might just want to visit!

Who are some writers that influence you and what books do you enjoy reading?

I’m a huge fan of Stephen King, Charles Bukowski and Chris Whittaker, to name a few quickly. But generally I love reading anything dark and gritty with wonderful memorable characters. It’s all about the characters for me. As a teenager I was very influenced by Stephen King, and SE Hinton.

What made you decide to create Chasing Driftwood Books?

I’ve been writing and independently publishing since 2013. I’ve published with indie collectives three times before, but each one eventually folded. They were all different, but essentially they were all allowing authors to self-publish for free and keep their royalties, but belong to a bigger community of authors who can support each other and help promote each other. I wanted to take all I had learnt from those platforms and create our own. We are very small at the moment but will open for submissions in due course! What I have realised since I started publishing was that it’s very, very difficult to land an agent and get a traditional deal these days, and also that the traditional deals are not always what they are cracked up to be. I’ve learnt that indie authors who do well are in the most enviable position of all. They have full creative control, retain full royalties and can very often earn enough to give up their day jobs. But to achieve that, they often have to pump a lot of money into their books. Paying for editing, proofreading and professional covers, goes without saying, but to really succeed they also need to be paying for advertising. Low income authors, disabled authors and other under-represented groups, are simply not in a position to do this. I’ve been an avid reader of indie books for some time and have read some truly extraordinary books by incredibly talented authors who should be selling far more and getting far more success and visibility. Money is so often the problem. What we are hoping to do here is draw quality authors together into a community that can help support and promote each other. That is just the start but the long-term aim is increased visibility for all our authors!

You have a prominent cast of male protagonists throughout your books. What is it about writing through their eyes that inspires you to do so?

I think I once sat down and worked out that by the time I have written and released all my works-in-progress plus all my vague ideas for books, I will have an equal amount of male and female protagonists! But I get what you are saying. With my published books at the moment, there are more male protagonists than female. I think partly this is pure accident, in as much as the characters just come to me and I can’t often control their gender. But also I think in the past at least I have been more curious about the male view and experience, simply because I am not one! So, that made it just a bit more interesting to explore.

Finally, what more can we expect from the world of Chantelle Atkins?

Two more books in the interconnected The Boy With The Thorn In His Side universe, as already mentioned, followed I expect a year later by the full Black Hare Valley trilogy. I have also started a fifth book in The Day The Earth Turned series, though that is taking a back seat at the moment! Works-in-progress involve a half-finished YA zombie apocalypse story told in a diary format, a family mystery called The 7th Child, and a story about two dysfunctional young adults who get bored of waiting for the apocalypse so decide to try and start one themselves… I am also planning to write a crime book with my oldest child, Daisy! She is about to start her Masters in creative writing and we have come up with an excellent serial killer plot set on a university campus! I have another YA post-apocalyptic story that has been planned with character bios done…. I think that’s it!

Thanks for dropping by, Chantelle!

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